Wednesday, October 19, 2005

My pathetic rhyme

Kak yung's birthday was last Monday on the 17th of October. I tried my hand at rhyming some words to put on kak yung's card and came up with this pathetic and most ridiculous piece.

I didn't have time to come up with this rhyme by Friday (to give it sufficient time to arrive on Monday) so prolly kak yung will only get the card today.

Don't smirk too much while reading eh and do give allowances for an amateur rhymer.

Dearest Kak Yung,
No words can express,
These feelings of mine,
Of my eldest sister Zainab
Whose four years short of twenty-nine.
She's unpredictable, she's moody
And yells at us when we become unruly,
But that's just because
It was our fault truly
She's really kind, caring and thoughtful
Generous and very creative too,
But very protective of her sisters mind you!
If there's one thing,
Let me tell you this,
Who else can compare,
To my BIG SIS :)
On this birthday of yours,
So specail a day,
May Allah give you many rewards,
And bless you till May.
(forever actually)
pendek je... too long nanti tak muat card... hehe.
What do u think of it?
Too terrible??

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